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Originally Posted by intlplby
the purple and green button seem out of place with the rest of the color scheme
counters are cheesy
put the "made on a mac" and heart rapidweaver more discretely at the bottom.... this is a website not a formula 1 car
you could photoshop up the two photos to make it more visually interesting/arresting..... both of them lack 'pop'
if someone clicks the button title like "film gallery" for example... don't point them to a page that says "Please use the navigation palate at the top to navigate to view one of Orloffi'm's major film productions." instead make a page that maybe links to each of the subcategories... in the case of films you could maybe put a screenshot or title for each and/or a brief description
as far as the cookie film (only one i watched so far) you need to spend more time on lighting.... the main character was often times very poorly lit and not in some dramatic way....
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yay! My site is now up and I've made some improvements. I agree with you on every point you made. Thank you.
The new site sports:
- New image-based gallery viewing so you don't just have to use the pull-down menus at the top
- New nice-looking images indicating "Play Now" on the Home page instead of boring, flat pictures
- New content (classic old stuff)
- "Made for Mac" and "Rapidweaver" are near the bottom
- Deleted counter
EDIT: I would LOVE any more advice that you could give. I need my website to look as professional as possible. Thanks~
EDIT: And to the folks at home, my site is in my signature.
www.orloffilm.com.