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Capella
Dark Cat of the Sith
 
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Rochester, NY
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2009-11-02, 11:39

I really enjoy this story. The character development is great; you really get a sense of who Mike is at the same time as you are realizing that you don't really want to know who Mike is because he's kind of an asshole. I love the way we start to see him slowly break down as he's haunted. And I absolutely love the ending line Overall, excellent story, made me creeped out.

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