BANNED I am worthless beyond hope.
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Inner Swabia. If you have to ask twice, don't.
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interesting idea. my only critique really is that the odor of a decomposing corpse would have been prevalent throughout the apartment building not just the neighbor's abode.
but that leads to an awesome possible plot twist -- the tree has been there forever, cared for by these lonely old people which it consumes floor by floor -- the landlords are in on it, of course and the protagonist doesn't know about it because he hasn't been living there that long and the building has a fairly high turnover except for the elderly...
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