Not bad... but... <mode=nitpick>
Paragraph three: "The ease of use that Apple is infamous for with its Macintosh computer line..."
Hitler was infamous.
Marilyn Monroe was famous.
Bad things are infamous.
Good things are famous.
Third paragraph from end: "The iPod is currently the #1 selling music player as measured by unit sales, and even higher if measured by revenues."
How can it be *higher* than #1?? Maybe the *margin* to its next competitor is larger...
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