I think those are much better than your very first one. I prefer the first one, with the fish in a circle.
I don't believe your name is too tight on the first, but that upper text block ("DURHAM DBT, INC.") is tracked way out.
Were you thinking about adding some color to the type, as I did earlier? Is that what you're referring to when you say you're not sold on the black type? Sample that darker orange from the fish and try your name and DURHAM DBT, INC. and see?
I'm assuming you're building this card, like me, at 200%. When you shrink back down to final 3.5x2 print size, how's the size on those address/phone blocks gonna be? That was something I keep messing with, trying to keep them at no smaller than 16pt. (because that would be 8pt. on the actual size). But I've used 7pt. before (but I hate going below that, especially if you think some older folks might be viewing).
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